Haikus Through the Years
Haiku is a short Japanese poem. Traditional Japanese haiku is about nature; it’s unrhymed consisting of 17 syllables arranged in three lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively. But modern haiku can also be about anything – love, death, relationship, pain, commitment, social awareness, family, etc.
It was the late Fr. James J. O’Brien, SJ, who taught our high school class at the Ateneo de Naga how to write haikus.
Since I am not a poet, longer poems are difficult for me to write. So, over the years, I would occasionally write haikus so that I could express what I was feeling in just a few words. Writing a haiku forces me to choose the most appropriate words to transform my feelings at the moment into words.
As Koichi Hasegawa, a Japanese sociology professor puts it, “Likewise, haiku refrains from too many words and phrases; thus, it is considered important to leave subtle overtones of the haiku to the reader’s own interpretation.”
So, for a change, instead of writing an opinion piece this week, I would like to share through my Bicol Mail column 20 selected haikus that I have written over the years. My intent is to impart the idea that we can always communicate what is significantly important to us in the fewest number of words.
Ah, cold as it was
I walked toward Bulusan
With pale frozen face.
Breathless in my dream
Sweet soothing voice lifts my soul
Of birds flapping wings.
Like the bright sunlight
Family’s love does not fade
No peeping shadow.
Born to sacrifice
Mother, daughter cringe in pain
Flowers are in bloom.
Red wine to a friend
Awake through the dark winter
Priceless forever.
Teachers, friends, colleagues,
Workmates, playmates, classmates – You
Yes, we all matter.
Justice and peace thrive
When acts of courage, like rain,
Sweep the dusty grave.
Intense, so gently,
Comrades shower me with love
Days turn into spring.
Fields and factories
Knowledge and experiences
Shelter life from pain.
Glances of sadness
We have exchanged – tears flowing
Singing freedom songs.
Swiftly blowing wind
Silenced the sounds of gunfire
People have spoken.
Born with dignity
A light flashing in darkness
Known to be a friend.
O’er the blue heavens
Comes a soul in thanksgiving
Full jubilation.
Best in many ways
Climbing the rugged foothills
Win or lose, stood still.
Dove flying away
Comes not with sorrow but hope
Till we meet again.
Your sterling goodness
Stirs the calmness of the sea
True man for others.
Love touches the heart
Birds soar in jubilation
Tweeting songs of joy.
You light darkened rooms
With care never before seen
Grateful to the end.
No storm with vengeance
Can take my true love away
You will always be.
Now more than ever
Gazing at the horizon
Penned is destiny.
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